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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :) Aw, this was so adorable! I love these more lighthearted Marauder stories, though the threat of Voldy is on the horizon, and this lovely little story was so much fun. I think James and Sirius especially were characterized perfectly, especially with how playful and earnest James was while Sirius' pride is a little more easily wounded. James is so easy-going and such a good sport, which I really appreciate in him.

The prank just made me giggle so much, it was so clever! Lily really showed a mischievous side showing how she could give the boys a run for their money. I liked seeing Peter too since at this point he would still be a good mate, though it was interesting how he lost the chess game which I feel was probably the sort of thing which happened to him a lot in which he could never be quite as good as Sirius and James.

The ending was so sweet, good for Lily for making James work for his kisses! I loved the promise of a future between them, and how Lily clearly likes him though she plays it cooler than he does. This was a great story, and good luck in the Duel! :D

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it and the characterisations. I get so happy when people like my Marauders :D

hahaha, let's face it; Lily was much cooler than James with her feelings. He probably didn't understand them properly, hahaha!

Thank you so much for this lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

- Kayla :)


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