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Review:Secret Santa says:

This was a great chapter! I absolutely loved it! I loved how Art is so quiet and calm, he really balances their little group, doesn't he? :p

I LOVED this line: "I pride myself on my idiocy. Being an idiot is my entire personality! And my best talent." Had me laughing SO loudly! :p

Oh god, I also laughed so loudly at this conversation. I nearly cried, ahahahaha!

"I'm glad David is my friend," Art said. "He provides great entertainment. We don't even have to pay!"

"Don't you dare let David hear you saying that," Albus said teasingly. "Or he'll make us start paying. I don't want to lose any galleons!"

That was literally the best. You've got a great sense of humour, I love it! :D

The theories are really intriguing! Every time they stated a theory I agreed with it! I'm just SO CURIOUS as to what the real thing is! I can't wait to find out! :D

Oh, I also loved how Al was happy to hit James with bludgers. True, brotherly love right there! :p

Anywho, this was an amazing chapter! You write fantastically! Have you ever thought of writing professionally? :)


- Secret Santa ;)

Author's Response: Art is calm, and loyal, and the group would fall apart without Art.

David gets some VERY amusing lines. I love writing David, he's probably my favorite character to write.

I'm surprised none of my friends have demanded money yet for all the entertainment they do. I'm sure many people could do a business on that.

I'm glad you like all the theories! I tried to make it so none of them could be false and unrealistic.

I really don't have to do much imagination in terms of Albus and James, since I have an older brother as well. I would love to hate mine with a bludger!

I have thought about writing professionally when I am older... that compliment made me joyful the entire day. I've never heard anyone ask me that before! Thank you so much!

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