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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
It's here!!! :D

This was so sweet and lovely to read. James had the arrogance we know well, and then the softer side Lily gets to see - you wrote him very well, I think.

I'm glad he let her go; it was a little sad to see Lily so... upset by the mistletoe, but it made the end so much better, for her to kiss him willingly. I wanted to hug them.

And I loved the banter between the friends. "It's like magic." - Awesome! :D

Good luck with the Writer's Duel, Cal!


Author's Response: Sam! Thank you so much for your review which is making my head swell incredibly!

I felt a bit awkward writing Lily under the Mistletoe, though I'd assume Lily would have recovered fairly quickly afterwards. You never know though and James stopping his grand plans to listen to someone else paid off far greater than he expected. In fact, I'm not sure if he would even have told anyone the next day after the kiss. It makes me feel all warm inside thinking about James proving himself to Lily :)

I loved writing the banter as well, so I'm overjoyed that others get to share that. Thanks heaps!

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