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Review:CambAngst says:
Hello, again!

This chapter felt like a momentous occasion was in progress. Andromeda was once and for all taking her freedom from the House of Black. She's an adult and she's choosing her own path. I loved the bittersweet quality the first section had to it. She's feeling the anxiety and the excitement about her pending freedom, but also the worry and regret. I really liked the way she worries for Narcissa and what will become of her little sister once she's no longer there to counter Bella's influence. It's kind of horrible that she puts her faith in Lucius to keep Cissy from turning dark.

The ends of her lips crease downwards in a frown at the thought. She will never see her family again. -- Wow. When you put it like that...

Sirius was adorable in this. He's so young still and carefree and innocent in a way. But he already knows enough to worry about how his mother is going to take the news of his sorting. It was so kind of her to offer to help him. Also sets up what's coming in the next chapter rather nicely.

The last section was bittersweet, but in a different way from the first one. She seems so genuinely happy in spite of all of her worries. The two of them truly love one another. Then that second-to-last sentence, gah! Andromeda can remember each time he has said that too, every day, time, setting. She reckons this time has to be one of the best times out of them all though. Too bad her opportunities will be prematurely cut short. :(

Awesome chapter! No typos or anything that I could see. Until next time!

Author's Response: Hi Dan!

I'm really glad that you picked up on the bittersweet air within Andromeda. I think the biggest worry for her is not that will she ever fall out of love with Ted, but will she manage to maintain that bond she has with Narcissa. Those two have such an odd relationship with them going through bouts of caring and then being enemies. I suppose because of that, Andromeda knows she has to try and trust Lucius because her influence on her sister is limiting.

Haha, with that line I mean her family minus Bella :P

I felt so bad writing him like that because I wanted to preserve him like that and not let him grown any older because all the horrible stuff happens. Yes, that bit of foreshadowing with the family was fun :P

I know what you mean! I really should just stick to writing next gen because happy endings can always occur then unlike in the other eras where death always seems to present in one way or the other.

Thanks for an awesome review, and I can't wait to see what you think of the rest!

-Kiana


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