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Review:Santa says:
Hello there! It's Santa here, back to leave you another review!
So this was another excellent chapter! I'm really intrigued to see where you go from here now that Vernon has arrived and James and Lily aren't too far behind! I have a feeling things are going to get really hectic!
I really enjoyed getting more of an insight into Petunia's character in this chapter! I think you write her very well, especially because she's still so young at this point. She's stubborn and immature at times, and I think that works really well for her character, especially after living such a different, and in her words boring, life compared to her younger sister.
I loved the tension you brought into the relationship through Petunia's memories of her life before and after Lily knew she was a witch. That feeling of being overshadowed and overlooked comes across so strongly in this that it just makes me want to give Petunia a big hug! The question I have is if Petunia has exaggerated anything that's happened in her life. Since we're seeing this from her side of things, are her parents really that much more focused on Lily or is it just Petunia's mind blowing things out of proportion because she's jealous? It does add a great deal of depth to her character and to the relationship, which I really enjoyed.
I hope you'll update this soon, I'm really curious to see where things go from here! Great work so far! 10/10

Author's Response: Hi There again. Thank you so much for this lovely review.

I'm glad you think I wrote Petunia well. The idea behind this chapter was to show a different side to Petunia. So I'm glad you liked getting an insight into her character. I think she's an interesting character, especially since you only see her from Harry's POV.


And thank you for that question. I've been waiting for someone to ask me that, and finally someone did. I definitely believe it's exaggerated. For example, I don't think her father said those exact words in their mother's funeral, but that's what Petunia heard. Petunia tells us that her father said that and her sister did that. But she's also so jealous of her sister and so angry at her father that their actions may have been perceived differently than intended. So to answer it shortly; Yes, I definitely think it's exaggerated.

Thank you so much. You really made my day with this lovely review. And I'll definitely update soon

- Lotte



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