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Review:A considerably less jolly Santa :p says:
Oh, Teh, once again you have rendered me incoherent.

I absolutely love the care and consideration that you've put into this chapter, even down to the formatting (incredibly effective by the way)

Fred and George are characters I've always avoided writing just because I don't think I'm funny enough to do them justice, a problem you certainly have no problem with. You had just the right amount of them speaking as one person and finishing each other's sentences (something that can often be over done), their pranks were exactly right and their characterisations spot on.

The way you descibed Fred's death from his own point of view was beautiful, and of course his last thought was of George...heartbreaking.

Once again, I am completely envious of your wonderful writing.

Author's Response: :( :( :(


I now realise how difficult it is to read, as though seeing Fred's death through George's eyes in the first chapter was not enough...and now you have to read about it through Fred's own eyes. UGH NO. I rewrote this chapter many, many times, and I think I will have to rewrite it again because the story has changed somewhat, taken a new direction.

I'm so relieved to hear that I handle the twins OK; I'm a bit afraid of continuing this story because I think I've lost my grip on them. But your review is really so reassuring! Thank you ♥

*hugs Santa and never lets go*


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