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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Well, I suppose I can be lovely for one final time.

This was amazing, Kiana. Out of all the chapters, I don't think there were any like this one. This one was so different. You focused a lot on description and emotions and this for me was the best one. This is how last chapters should be like - because it's made an amazing and lasting impression.

when Andromeda was talking to Tonks and to Remus as if they were there... it was heartbreaking. It was so real and emotional, I couldn't get enough of it. It was just so sad. This was beautiful:

Leaning down, Andromeda points her wand at the white marble and whispers the incantation and tulips burst out of her wand. The colours are an eclectic mixture of reds, purples, greens, yellows and blues. Everything. Just like Remus and Tonks who are, were, everything. -- this was some great description, and again left such an impact. It was amazing.

I loved the paragraph at the end. What a fabulous way to bring it come to a close. Really clever.

Great work Kiana! Happy holidays, and congratulations on finishing. This has been a pleasure to read and review.

Author's Response: Yay, Nadia :D

I'm glad that you picked up on the differences in this story to the others. I wanted to show the more reflective/deep side to Andromeda after her family has died, and Bella really has gone and betrayed for what she did to Tonks.

I'm so so glad that you liked that part because Remus and Tonks are very dear to me with them being my OTP, so I really wanted to reflect the pain that I and all the other shippers felt for them including what Andromeda must have been feeling.

I'm glad you liked the last paragraph because it was one of the few signs of hope showed in this story. Thank you for being a wonderful review, it was always a delight to hear what you thought! Merry Christmas :D

-Kiana


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