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Review:likeness_of_a_seabird says:
I'm back to review the last two chapters!

Well, first of all... the hat. *The hat*. God, I loved that hat. I could have read forever about it, insulting the founders (and everyone else). Someone needs to write a story about the Sorting Hat. The bit with the hat was the perfect length, as well; not too short, which means the reader had time to get to know the hat, but it wasn't too long either, which could have bored the reader.

About the dormitories: I can't remember for the life of me if there were some mention of the dormitories magically expanding in the books, but if there wasn't, I think it's a very clever idea.

I'm slowly warming up to Salazar, although I still think he could have been pushier about not admitting Muggle-borns; but that's just my opinion. I'm getting this feeling that although he is acting nice now, things are going to change radically very soon.

I liked the way you handled the founders' children. You kept Helena beautifully in character having her voice her dislike of being known only as Rowena Ravenclaw's daughter and I feel that you gave the other children very defined characters even though we saw very little of them.

I liked the last chapter. Although not much happened, I feel as though it's only the calm before the storm. Something big is about to come and it's coming soon.

Keep up the good work; I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Haha, I'm so glad you like the hat! I honestly have no idea how it ended up being so sassy, but I think if I were a hat that had to deal with four personalities I might be a little irritated as well! :p

I don't remember the dormitories magically expanding in the books. (I suppose maybe they did - and if so I'd forgotten as well, but I don't think they did!) Anyway, thank you!!

Good prediction about Salazar ;) As we know, Hogwarts did well for a number of years with all four of them, so I figured there couldn't have been super intense arguments that early on. But yeah... it is approaching the end so you know something big is coming up.

Ah thank you! I'm so glad you think Helena is in character and that you liked the other children's personalities as well. I know they have a pretty limited role so it's really wonderful to hear that you think they had such defined characters. :)

I've been a little stuck in writing this one recently but I'm hoping to get the next chapter written over the next week! Thank you so much for your lovely review!!


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