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Review:Sunflower says:
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This was really good - I adored your take on the Next Gen! James was absolutely perfect. This whole piece was like a breath of fresh air. The dynamic between the family was great and I think you really did the introduction of the Weasleys in a great way - it was very subtle yet well done. Your characterization is really great.
The dialogue was to die for! "... and that sparked a very typical Mum-and-Lily argument that had Al, Dad, and me scurrying for the back garden to listen to the Puddlemere United game."
There were so many different parts that fitted so well into the story - there was such a good flow to it.

And the end! Oh my, that was amazing. Such a cliffhanger. I think you've written an amazing starting chapter - well done!! :)

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