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Review:smitlikesllamas says:
Hey, hey! :)

You sure do like your foreshadowing, don't you? :P I love it. I'm interested in the gap in the wall. I just hope this gap in the wall isn't as scary as the crack in the wall in Doctor Who. :P

So, not a lot happened in this chapter, but that's okay. I mean, what did happen was interesting. We got some back story about Ellie's life in the beginning the of the chapter, and then we got some Regulus AND Al action!

I'm loving R and A right now. :P

I really liked that like "I will find out your secrets." It was just so absurd and, like. I don't know, it was just funny. :P

I think I like Regulus so much because of his personality. I mean, why else would I like him, but seriously. He's so different from other Regulus's because usually he's alive and in school, which was a dark period. He's generally seen as a dark character, and I like this spin. I kind of like to think he was secretly a lot like Sirius, so I'm glad to see him portrayed that way.

I can't wait for Al to find out about Ellie's "gift". At least, I assume he'll find out. I hope he's the first one to find out and that's how he and Ellie become friends, and everyone's like "what you're friends now?" and they're like "yeah long story, not gonna tell you" and then a little while later they fall in love and get married and have ten babies.

sorry.

Haha, anyway, don't forget to request the next chapter! I'm loving this story, by the way. It's a story with a new plot, and it's refreshing in that way. I like it. :)

~Smit

Author's Response: All the foreshadowing, all the time! And nothing is scary as the crack in the wall from DW! I can hardly compete.

I thought people might enjoy if I included both the boys together. I can understand why Regulus is really popular, but I don't understand Al's lure at all - I am happy that people seem to like him however, even if he is such a pain to write. And yeah, Albus needs to work on his pickup lines. "I will find out your secrets" is not the best way to a lady's heart.

... Judging from your musings about Ellie and Al, I think you'll find that you and Ellie have a lot in common - that comment will make sense in the next chapter. And don't be sorry about it! I can't imagine Ellie having ten babies, but I can totally imagine Al teasing her about it, and she just sasses at him about going through pregnancy ten times.

Thanks so much for this funtastic review!


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