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Review:SkyEcho says:
Hi MC_HK!

This chapter really allowed me to get a better sense of Anaxandra - and I loved it! I especially LOVED the part where she creates the night's sky on the ceiling. Beautiful. I'm definitely liking her and rooting for her.
I also enjoyed seeing the interactions between Anaxandra and Draco. It's interesting, yet believable, that he'd withhold information about her from his boss. And coupled with Anaxandra's thoughts that they're similar in some way - it really works to add an element of intrigue to their relationship. I look forward to finding out more about this.
The bickering between them was done very well. My favourite line has to be when Draco says, "Better feed the beast, Synder."
I felt bad for Draco when it was revealed that Gawain didn't follow through on his promise to relieve him of those extra files.
You've left me feeling for your characters! Great chapter - and I can't wait to find out what happens next :)

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed this chapter! I'm glad that you got a good sense of my characters in the beginning chapters. That was my intention :) Also glad you like the dialog up because I feel like that's what makes a character and the fact you think they work well in a conversation is relieving.

Alright hope to see you back soon! Thank you for reviewing!

Monica


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