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Review:Secret Santa :) says:
It's me again! I saw the summary for this story and couldn't resist :)

Right off the bat I'm impressed that you have such a large cast. Nextgen stories really intimidate me sometimes because there are just SO MANY characters to work with. But I think you did a good job of weaving in the basics about each Weasley cousin in a seamless way, in scene rather than just bombarding us with information. I'm so excited to see more!

Poor Lily is so down on her luck :( I felt so bad for her when she got that rejection letter from the Ministry. But judging by the story summary she'll be finding her way into baking soon? So it's probably for the best that she didn't get that job. I really like her voice, and I think she'll be a fun narrator as the story goes on :)

Nice opening! I'll definitely read on...keep watching for me to leave another surprise! ;)

--Your Hufflepuff Secret Santa

Author's Response: Hello! ;)

I ALWAYS get so nervous having to explain all the cast but I'm glad you liked the way I did it!

Yeah, she finds her way into baking soon. It might be a little too rushed but I didn't want to bore everyone with fillery chapters, ahaha :p

Thank you so much for the reviews, Maggie! And sorry for the delay in answering these!

- Kayla :)


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