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Review:patronus_charm says:
You have one of those author pages where everything just cries read me! So I ended up choosing out of the prettiest banners :P Hopefully, I can squeeze in some more reviews in the next 24 hours so all will be good!

Aw, this one-shot was just like walking into candyfloss from the cuteness of it all ♥ Seriously, if this was you trying your best at fluff this is mean dealing with that fact :'''( Ok where to start really? Fleur was wonderful, she still had that haughty air about her with the way she said she thought French and Paris was more romantic than anything English and it reminded me of the first time we met her in canon.

Though she seemed to have softened herself too because when she was thinking about how her and Billís relationship has developed it just left me awing like crazy. With the way she said he was home to her it made her seem so insecure for once and unsteady, which is a new side I never really imagined her to have. I liked the fact that she could be more sensitive and that perhaps Bill had made her like that.

Bill was so cute! The way he proposed to her in French and all. He just wanted to try so hard to please her and I could really tell that he loved her a lot so seeing that here was so cute. I probably sound a little crazy gushing away at this one-shot, but I just have a soft spot for Bill and Fleur and you really showed me why I do here. Then the closing lines with the way he kissed were perfect. It could have veered into cheesiness so easily, but you managed to keep it at fluff which was really great.

A wonderful one-shot and I hope to read some more of your stuff soon!


Author's Response: Thank you so much Kiana! If I remember correctly, this was my first attempt at Fluff and it was really cute to write. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it and that I got Fleur's character right - she's a really tough character to write I think. So thank you and Merry Christmas :)

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