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Review:MidnightBlue_x says:
Okay, final review for this request. If you'd like me to continue, please feel free to re-request. Anyway, on with the review!

I like how you start every chapter the same- it's very cool and I love seeing what Ellie thinks makes your life not normal. (The start of this one sounds particularly enjoyable if you ask me!) I feel Ellie when she says that she hates pretty much all forms of physical exercise- that's me too. I love how she thinks she's going to get away with it too, only to have Chris be made charge of her running. I also totally get Ellie not being a morning person, I mean who is?

I'm just loving the interaction between Ellie and Albus. Especially when she considers being the bigger person, but decides his smug attitude is just too much to take. I'll be interested to see some more Scorpius in the future too- and especially some more interaction between Chris, Albus and Scorpius, I'd like to see more of their friendship because I think it could be really interesting. And James! I loved the story about the poison ivy- that was very funny.

The smart little comments that Ellie makes are just wonderful. I especially liked 'Chris made friends like mitochondria metabolised glucose for energy' and 'The rest of them had absorbed me through a slow process of diffusion'. I feel like Ellie is just living my life for me. I did notice just under that, that you wrote 'some Wotter kids' instead of Potter.

I instantly loved Amy. I'm really interested to see the friendship between Amy, Ellie and Rose now. I think that they're different personalities will make for a really interesting combination. Ben sounds like an interesting character too- I can't wait to see where that goes! I loved all the Doctor Who and James Bond references too.

Again, loved the chapter! I'm definitely interested to see where the story goes now that they are back at Hogwarts. So that's the end of my reviews, feel free to re-request anytime!

x Ely

Author's Response: It is SO DIFFICULT to think up those opening lines - I've rewritten many a scene just to get that first line right! It's so nice of you to appreciate it! (And on a side note, if three buff fictional guys wanted to eat breakfast without any upper body coverings in my kitchen, they would be more than welcome!) I hate physical exercise, too! And morning people are really aliens in disguise.

Albus really pushes all her buttons, doesn't he? And I promise that there is more Scorpius to come! He was surprisingly fun to write... And OMG James! Even I fangirl over him!

Ellie has a weirdly wonderful way of looking at the world. I'm glad that the readers appreciate it, because she feels that most of the characters in her sphere of influence don't. And my "Wotter" is a blend of "Weasley-Potter" - I should explain that somewhere...

Amy is the bomb! Ben is the bomb! That entire family is the bomb! And not only because they're secretly spies, either.

Thanks so much for these wonderful reviews! I really appreciate them, and I'll be sure to re-request when there is an available spot in your queue!

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