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Review:Fairly Fairest Fairy of Fun says:
Part 3! :D I liked the opening with Dean Thomas, very much a parallel to Michael's opening chapter. It made me laugh that he deals illegal plants. Itís just not something you would normally think of happening in the wizarding world, so nice job on the creativity there! :) The development of Cho's character is great and just SO contrasting to her canon character, I can't get enough of it! Itís like I want to hate her but I just can't. The classic girl fight was a spectacular use of first person from Cho's POV. She's such a snob and I can't get over it! I can't really tell if her and Lavender fighting was meant to help them get back with Ron and Harry or if it just so happened that Cho was upset she was using Michael Corner for it. Either way, great scene there! But Neville! Such a BAMF! Love him!! :D Stellar chapter. :)

Author's Response: Of course he would be dealing illegal plants :P He's right into the wizarding underworld with the likes of Mundungus now. I really like these sorts of worlds because they're so unexplored but so interesting too. I'm glad that you liked Cho, she was rather feisty and snobby here. :P In a way, I'm glad there was confusion because I think the two of them aren't really sure, but deep down Cho was betrayed but what Lavender did. Yay for Neville! He does love his little cameos of bravery now and then :P Thanks for another amazing review! :D

-Kiana


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