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Review:Fairly Fairest Fairy of Fun says:
Here for part 2 of my first Secret Santa gift! :) Oh Michael, Michael, Michael. You've written perfectly as the jerk-y guy only focused on getting some for himself. He's the epitome of why feminism exists in the world today, but I wont get into that. I find it funny that he uses a tanning booth, even though he is a half-blood, because it's usually just girls that use them or huge narcissists, of which Michael is one. Lavender has developed in this chapter to--you made the time jump very clear and the reasoning behind her wanting to do a deal with Michael to get Ron back and to improve his reputation. Her naivete when it comes to Ron and her desire to be with him and do anything to get him back is great and pokes fun at those types of girls. Michael is the typical womanizer who will probably end up single and crotchety in his old age. Great second chapter! :)

Author's Response: Hi again, I'm still not having any luck on sussing you out :P

I'm so glad that you thought Michael was written well, it was so much fun to explore the egotistical man :P I wouldn't have minded too much if you went on a feminist rant, it would have been interesting! I'm glad that the back story behind Lavender here was fine because no one really ever said anything about it so it had left me wondering, she is a bit of a lost soul here though :P Thanks for another great review FFFoF :D

-Kiana


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