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Review:LilyLou says:
Jenna!

This story is beautiful. Everything about it is just perfect. I have never read anything quite like this, so it's originality definitely catches my attention.

I love how you wrote Bellatrix, in particular. Her cool demeanor is perfect. She has control and I just love how you wrote her. I like how you include Sirius in there as well. It was small, but it made the story that much more believable.

You most definitely deserved to win the challenge you wrote this for. Congratulations!

-Janelle

Author's Response: Hi Janelle! :)

Aw, thank you so much! The story was inspired by the Plath poem 'Lady Lazarus' and the poem really came through when I was writing it, so I'm so happy you found it original.

I love writing Bellatrix as a supporting character, though the idea of writing her in first person terrifies me. :P I'm glad you thought she was characterized well, and the little mention of Sirius.

Thanks so much for such a beautiful review! :) It was so sweet and great to get your lovely comments.


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