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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hey! Round 2!

This chapter was way way way way better than the last one! Ah! I loved it!

I can't wait to find out how Laila does on her quidditch try outs!

Oh and was that blonde hair that put the plate down in front of her Scorp?

I hate how mean everyone is to Laila, I felt so bad when her bed was all torn apart! Though when I read the words wrecking ball I could think of was the song. Darn that Miley Cyrus. What's up with her and James? Does she like him?

Anyway, this chapter was incredible, I honestly can't find a single critique to give you, other than be careful when making edits because you have some extra spaces especially before and after the line breaks! So just keep an eye on that!

Can't wait for the next chappie! Great job!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Thank you!! Tryouts are in the next chapter, which I'll try and get into the queue once it opens up again. Yup, that blondie was le Scorp (maybe i should make that more clear *runs off to edit it*) As for James, I can't say anything . . .

No edits? Really?!?! Sorry about the spaces, not really sure how that happens :/

Thank you so much for this review and can't wait for you to read the next one!!

-Sankavi ^_^

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