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Review:Albus Potter's Woman says:
Hello again :)

So a fast update. Thank you very much. And you didn't disappoint with the wackiness. You know I just knew that Cat was going to say something dimwitted in this chapter to end with a bang. And lets face it. Expecting James Potter to not snog other girls is pretty dimwitted. As mean as it sounds.

One thing I think you should correct is the incorrect spelling of pout. "Thus began the eye brow lowering, the squinty eyes and the pount." Also eyebrow is one word. I also think this chapter was quite short in comparison to your other ones :(

Good job writing though

~Albus Potter's Woman

Author's Response: Hello!
I'm glad you liked it again and thanks for pointing those out, I'll have to go and correct them :)

Thanks you for another lovely review :)

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