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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :) Of course I've already read this, but that was all about grammar and boring things, so thought I'd stop by to leave some love!

I'm so happy you updated this! The chapter flowed really well off of the first chapter what with Walburga's dark voice and thoughts, but also showed a more upbeat and motherly side to her character which I love. I'm really excited to see how she turns into the evil bitter woman in the portrait who Sirius resents so much, and what's going to happen to her friends and family along the way.

Elladora, Beaux and Winston are wonderful characters! I like how they all have different reasons for appealing to Walburga and how comfortable the four of them are around each other, without a hint of romance (at least right now!). I'm also quite fascinated by Abraxas: he seems in control of his friends in a way reminiscent of Draco, though with less immaturity and the need to show off. Abraxas just radiates power instead of bullying others into thinking he has it. I think he's a really appealing character despite his obvious evil. One thing I really enjoy about this story is the amount of enemies and possible enemies Walburga has- having a lot of conflict makes for a very exciting story!

Hmm... possibly his friends are some Crabbe and Goyle grandparents?! :P If so that's awesome-I love the idea of generations of Malfoys being served by generations of Crabbes and Goyles- too funny!

So Walburga can see Thestrals? I wonder who she's seen die? I feel like she still has a great deal of history and dark secrets which will be slowly revealed, and I'm excited to learn more about why she's so damaged and continues to hate her family.

Abraxas' comments about the castle having eyes are so chilling! I'm worried for her, and wondering why he felt the need to deliver such a cryptic message. I'm also looking forward to learning how Hogwarts was in that era and what Walburga is like as a student.

Looking forward to the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Ahh Jenna, thanks so much for dropping by!

This review made my smile. I'm so thrilled that you like this story. You'll be the first to know why Walburga turns out to be how she is, and believe me when I say that that is the first thing I planned out, because what inspired me to write this was the question 'Why is Walburga so evil and crazy in her portrait?'

Elladora, Beaux and Winston are three characters that will be a large part of the story, as well as Abraxas, so I spent a great deal of time outlining what i want them to be like. I honestly think Abraxas is my masterpiece of this entire story, though.

Maybe you're right, maybe you're wrong about Crabbe and Goyle. However, I dropped a tricky hint in the first chapter's second A/N as to who one of them may be.

I'm so happy that I got that mysterious factor across like I hoped I would. I try hard to get that across.

You'll learn about her as a student in either the next chapter or the fourth. But don't worry, Hogwarts will be making its appearance in classes soon!

Thanks so much!

-Janelle



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