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Review:teh tarik says:
KAYLA! Ahhh, OK, this is such an adorable oneshot ♥ You've just made me giggle uncontrollably and slap my knees and all, and that really is a feat, seeing as I don't usually read a lot of Marauder fic, but time to time I do enjoy a well-written prank fic. And Lily and Mary are a wonderful duo here! I LOVE how they sow such dissent among the four Marauders, by splitting them up and turning them against each other and making James' and Sirius' plans backfire. And I love how Lily teases James with that final moment.

Also, I love how you opened the story, with James sitting upside down and Remus doing his homework and Sirius and Peter playing chess. It's just such a wonderful relaxed scene, and it is very Marauder-y. Especially loved how elated Peter is to have captured Sirius' queen, only to have all the triumph squashed out of him when Sirius checkmates him. LOVELY.

Congrats for writing such a lovely Christmassy Writers' Duel entry, Kayla! And best of luck with the competition! ♥ ♥

teh

Author's Response: TEH! Aw, thank you so much! You're always so kind and beautiful, you need to stop it! *blushes like a tomato*

Thank you so much for this lovely review! You're far too sweet! ♥

- Kayla :)


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