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Review:Mrs Ravenclaus says:
Back for some more Christmas cheer!

Lucinder is definitely my favourite of Lily’s friends. Usually, the friend of Lily’s which is paired with Sirius is a little boring and dull, but Lucinder is just the opposite. I love the devious nature about her with the way she went behind Lily’s back and plotted the revision sessions with James, it just made me laugh so much. Gah, I really hope this does kick them together because I’ve read my fair share of James and Lily stories but I’ve never seen them put together through this.

The rest of Lily’s friends were also really great. You continued their wonderful banter on brilliantly from last time and they really do click as a group so well. I think another which was great was how James had already given them Transfiguration lessons and they’d given him their stamp of approval. Lily, you really do need to stop fighting the current and just date him already!

I love how Lily’s trying to battle aware with her mental confusion of James and he takes that away from her right away and immediately arranges when they should have the revision sessions. They were so cute together though! With their blushing and the way Lily thought he wanted something else but he just wants her to do well. Gah, I had so many feels right then it was insane but gah, so cute, so, so cute!

I really want to know how her and Lucinder’s study sessions go right now! You really need to put another chapter up right away because the small bit of cuteness which I experienced earlier will not keep me happy for long!

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Hooray for more festive cheer :D I am actually quite glad I did not respond to these reviews before as reading them again now has just made me grin all over again (but I am sorry to have taken so long to respond!)

Lucinda is my favourite of Lily's friends too. She is really fun to write so it's good to hear that you liked her and that she made you laugh :) Mmm, will this kick James and Lily together? It's certainly the start of something ;) It's good to hear that this is a novel way of them getting together (er, if they get together that is -.- hehe)

I'm so glad you found the banter 'wonderful' :D thank you, I really enjoyed writing their interactions. Haha, I totally agree, Lily does need to stop fighting her feelings and just admit that James is perfect for her - I'm on Lucinda's side (and yours) on this one ;) I think the tutoring sessions will help Lily change her mind about him!

I am so happy you thought James and Lily were so cute together here and that their interaction gave you the feels :) More cuteness later on in the story!!

Hehe, I am working on the next chapter now (writing has taken a real backburner for the last month or so, but I'm back on it now - your reviews have motivated me a lot!) I hope the upcoming chapters will make you happy too!

Thank you so much for this wonderful review :)

Haronione ♥


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