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Review:Secret Snata says:
The amazing Hufflepuff Santa is back!

I've never really thought much about Lee's children. I don't know why. So it's good that you are using them; I like new characters.

I find this business really creative. I never really thought about how there might be businesses sprung from the second wizarding war. This is a really creative idea you have here.

It's ironic how Alicia is hoping that the buyer is anybody but Albus Potter, and it is Albus Potter. Love it.

I hope we learn more about what happened in the breakup with Albus and Alicia. I wonder why they did not leave on good parting terms.

I am grinning at picturing Sophie turning into a giraffe and breaking the ceiling. I'm sure it wasn't funny at the time, but it sure is now.

Hmm, I like how you leave us on edge how the appointment with Theirry will go.

Alicia seems like a good girl, I just think she hold on to grudges *cough* Albus *cough*. They should be fine, since it looks like Albus is trying to get their past out of the way and be professional. I think Alicia might do something though.

Great chapter! And I do hope you continue it, it would be a shame if you didn't.

Author's Response: It's great to see you back! :D

I didn't want to come up with an OC, since there are quite a few at the agency and I wanted to connect the next-gen to Potterverse. Then I remembered Lee Jordan's radio show in DH, and decided that he must have done other things to help the war effort, especially with the Muggle-born Registration Commission, so the idea for the agency was born. (In fact, I have a short story in the works about how Lee and Bex set up Jordan and Parsons!)

Hehe. Of course it would be the one person she didn't want, is it? :P

We'll definitely find out more about the Albus/Alicia breakup, and there'll be a confrontation between them where all the secrets they're hiding is revealed later in the story. ;)

HAHA! I wanted to inject some humour into the chapter, and I thought an Animagus form would be a great way of doing it, since I was trying to highlight Sophie's Transfiguration abilities at the same time. So I'm glad you like it :)

You'll have to wait and see if Alicia will do something ;)

The next chapter is up, and I will definitely complete this; all of my WIPs will eventually be completed no matter how long it takes me. I always feel terrible abandoning stories :P

Thank you for the review! ♥


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