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Review:pinkpunzel says:
First, When I saw my "name" at the top of this chapter I thought I was hallucinating. I carefully examined each letter in the word pinkpunzel, foolishly thinking that that would help understand why in the world my name was up there. Actually first I almost scrolled right past it, then my eyes went wide and my jaw dropped when I realized that you put my name up. My next impulse was to think that someone else had the same username as me. To make sure that it really was me and was meant to be me, I went to extreme measures. I held off on the temptation of reading the next chapter long enough to go check the 11 reviews left on the previous chapter to see that there is not, in fact, another pinkpunzel. Then I checked my review to see what was so amazing about it that you decided to dedicate a chapter to me. My search found nothing special but apparently it hit you close enough that you decided to dedicate a whole chapter to me! Onto the subject of that...YOU DEDICATED A CHAPTER TO ME! Forget that, you of all people the author of one of my favorite fanfics (and i read A LOT of fanfics, so this should not be taken lightly), ON one of my favorite fanfics dedicating a chapter to little old me. THAT'S AMAZING!! You're the only person who has ever so much as given me a mention,let alone a whole chapter!!! So, basically what I'm saying is...thank you...very very much.

Phew! Now that we have that out of the way, onto the actual chapter. I think getting Scorpius on bed rest was a smart move. I loved the part when Rose was going through his journal, not the fact that she actually went through it but the content of the journal. I thought it was very heartfelt and sappy; it was just what this story needed. The entire time I was reading that part I was internally screaming at Rose. I thought Scorpius was going to randomly wake up and see her reading his journal. I honestly think the snog session was perfectly written and placed. Usually I think heated snog sessions, like yours,are usually too sudden and unnecessary and random. But yours felt very fitting in the circumstances. I thought the part where Scorpius' mom comes up and Rose jumps into the chair was hilarious. Parents have such horrible timing, don't they? The part where Rose talks to Danielle was amazing. I think your character building on that part was really good. It said a lot about Rose to be able to pluck up the courage to do that. The way you ended this chapter, with having that talk with her father (melancholy stuff) and then Hugo bringing home a skimpy girl and Rose putting out his baby pictures (lighthearted, comedic things) was perfect. Overall, I think that this chapter had amazing content,was beautifully written and basically just perfect.

Lots of love,

p.s. I think this story really needed a sappy chapter.

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