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Review:toomanycurls says:
RRT!!

The entire time I read through this I was dying to know who it was!! I really liked the mystery and build up as you waited until the end to reveal the narrator. You did a great job not being obvious but still being quite enthralling. You definitely kept my interest throughout the story.

I really liked how he was on a quest throughout the story but he wasn't upfront about what he was looking for. I have no idea what he thought he'd do when he found the dark evil in Albania. Of course it was clear he was looking for Voldemort but the when was well obfuscated.

His interaction with the barman and his daughter was amazing. I can't imagine what kept them there with all the darkness going on. I got a laugh out of his explanation that he was trustworthy because of his status of being a Brit.

You put such dimension to Quirrel that didn't exist in my mind before. You made him see so real and complex.

-Rose

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!

I'm glad that you couldn't figure out who the character was until the end. That was kind of what I was going for--it made things more mysterious, after all! It's good to know that the story kept you interested throughout--I would hate to bore you! :)

He wasn't actually looking for Voldemort specifically, rather, he was looking for the evil thing that was rumored to be in the forest. I don't know if I made that clear--I might need to look at it, thanks for pointing it out!! No, I don't think that he went looking for Voldemort. He just wanted a chance to prove that he could win against Dark forces. I think it's safe to say that he lost!

Thank you so much for your wonderful compliments! I'm glad that I could put Quirrel into a new perspective for you. There are two sides to every story, after all! :D

~UnluckyStar57


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