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Review:SilverRoses says:
Ahh! This was so cute! I loved it behind measure.

It would take something pretty dramatic to get Lily's attention, wouldn't it? Poor James.

James and Lily are my favorite Harry Potter characters, and I love your characterization of them! And your writing is just so good, I don't have good enough words for it, so it will have to suffice to say that I love it.

This was absolutely perfect, and I adored it.

My favorite line:

'Well, someone will have to tell Hannah that my heart belongs to somebody else.'

That is like a perfect quote, and ought to have won Lily over ;)

I almost cried when he thought about telling the story of that Quidditch match to his kids. I just...

Perfect portrayal of Madam Pomfrey, by the way!

Gah, this story is too good!

One thing:

It has done for a long time now.

Leaving out 'done' would make it perfect.

I probably sound like a spaz...

Anyways, loved it! Fantastic work!

-Kelsi

Author's Response: You are spoiling me so much with these reviews, I really don't know how to thank you *blushes*

Yay, I love James and Lily so much too, they're definitely my OTP!

Aww I was worried that line would come over all cheesy but I'm glad it won you over!

Eugh, it broke my heart to think about James not being able to talk about the match to his kids. Why is JK so cruel?

You don't at all! That's a really good point, thank you... I will edit that too!

I can't even tell you how much I loved all your reviews, thank you so so much. I probably sound like an idiot but all I can say is thank you, they meant the world to me!

Lauren :)


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