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Review:toomanycurls says:
RRT!!!

Wow and amazing come to mind after reading this. Taking Snape from calling her mudblood to learning about her death is immense and I wouldn't have thought it possible with such a short story but you did it wonderfully. I particularly enjoyed how you marked the passage of time by how long it had been since they talked.

I really liked that despite trying to harden his heart and not still love her, his reaction to her death clearly showed his continued love for Lily.

-Rose

Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review! :)

I'm usually really wordy in my writing, so this story was a good challenge for me. I wanted to see if I could use very few words to make a big impact, and I like the way that this one turned out. :)

Thanks again!

~UnluckyStar57


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