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Review:CambAngst says:
Hi, there! It's been ages since I've checked in on dear Emily and her somewhat-out-of-control life. I've missed her, and you as well. I don't spend time in the common room like I used to.

Anyway, I really liked the session with Heather at the start of the chapter. It was good to see Emily starting to deal with some of her memories from the war. Baby steps, I suppose. I still feel like there are some terrible things that happened to her that she just hasn't dealt with yet. But this was a start, and it felt important. I also liked the parallels you created between the way that Emily chose to protect her parents and the things that Hermione did to prepare for what was coming.

I hope she gets a crup. It would be good for her, I believe. Something to snuggle with and keep the nightmares away.

So Tim hasn't called or written? I'm tempted to write him off as a jerk but something tells me there's more to it than that. At any rate, you kept Emily and Michelle both very true to character in their interaction.

I do hope you're still finding the time to continue writing this! Looking forward to next time!

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