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Review:smitlikesllamas says:
That was an awesome chapter. I think Regulus was so cute. ;)

Thanks for requesting, I'm glad you did.

I won't lie, I was a little disappointed in the lack of Al, but I could be reading a John Green book and be disappointed in the lack of Albus Potter, so don't read too much into that. :P

Anyway, this was a nice chapter. Nice length, with plenty of foreshadowing that's keeping me on the edge of my metaphorical seat (I'm actually lying in bed. :P ), and a smooth introduction to a new character. Not to mention a lot of subtle back story about Ellie's past, although I wouldn't mind learning what she generally does to help a ghost pass. That would be really interesting I think.

The humor was perfect. I was able to read it in a room full of people without making a fool out of myself, laughing like a maniac, but was still very entertained, so that's good.

There's not much else I've got to say though, other than to please please please make sure you request the next chapter. :D

Thanks again!
~Smit

Author's Response: Haha! Regulus is a bit of a cutie, isn't he?

Albus is very difficult for me to write - I don't know why, but he is very annoying. But when I do write him, I like to give him some depth, so I couldn't justify him being in this chapter (even though it's his house). Too much snark, you know? And also, it'd be a little as if he were stalking Ellie...

I have a ghost encounter planned for very, very soon! I want to do it justice, so that's why I'm taking my time getting to it, because I want the characters a little established before we start with the ghostie business.

I prefer my humour that way, so that's fantastic! :D

Thanks so much for this wonderfully lovely review!


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