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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
She tried. Wow. Narcissa actually tried to convince Regulus.

I actually love Narcissa so much. So many authors on this site give her this wonderful characterization and so do you. I loved it. Every piece of dialogue was just so perfect, and amazingly written. This was brilliant:

Cissy scoffs at that point. 'Because Lucius isn't any better than Bella when it comes to murdering?' -- this part was so whoa. I loved how she had this bitter sarcastic behaviour, like she knew her life was wrong and that she had all the wrong principles by the whole Pureblood supremacy, but she knew also knew that she couldn't change it. I loved the way you wrote her.

I think this is one of my favourite chapters too. It was such a unique memory out of Andromeda's life, and I wasn't expecting it at all. It was so fabulous! I loved the description too and the somber mood you had going.

This piece really centered on family. It was amazing to see that there was this cold relationship between the sisters, and you could sense that they didn't want it, but circumstances were keeping them apart. You showed that so well. That last line was epic, and broke my heart. The imagery was beautiful there.

Great work!

Author's Response: Yes, I wasn't sure whether she would try or not, but I think the scene in DH and she lies about Harry being dead showed me how much family means to her. I'm so glad that you love Narcissa because she means so much to me and she's really grown on me in this story.

Yes, that part sort of brought home how twisted all of their lives and the Black are. I'm so glad that you liked the internal conflict in Cissy, because I would really like her to be like that and for her to know what her life could have been like yet she doesn't realise how strong she is and how she couldn't have broken free.

I'm glad you found it unique because I wasn't sure whether people would think her going to her mother's funeral or not was, but I really like funeral scenes because they really are poignant parts of people's lives so it felt strange to omit it.

Woo, the theme of family has come through! I'm glad you liked the sibling bond because I've never really explored that sort of relationship before but it's so powerful that I'm really glad I got to write it here.

Thank you for such a wonderful Nadia!

-Kiana


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