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Review:marauderfan says:
Review swap!

When I read the summary I just had to click on this story, it's so original and exciting! Bellatrix is such a fascinating and evil character and I just love the idea of a story from her POV.

I think you write her very well! I like the way you described her constant dismissal of Jeremy, why she just thinks he is worthless. She seems like a younger version of her crazy self we know from the books - I think her single-minded attention on how much she hates him is pretty indicative of her future self and tendency to obsess over things (like Voldemort.)

Bahaha I like Slughorn's determination to pair up the students to encourage unity among the houses. That does sound like something he might have done.

Ha, Jeremy had a crush on Bellatrix? What kind of person has a crush on Bellatrix? :p Ok, maybe she was different as a teenager. Though seeing her behaviour here, I don't think she was that different! Jeremy's a little strange I guess :p

That must be the most awkward/difficult situation ever, to find themselves years in the future and married. I can only wonder how they will ever work together to sort it out! Well, Jeremy doesn't seem opposed to working together. But I think it will take a lot for Bellatrix to go along with it - she's not someone who likes to be told how to do things.

What a great start to this fic! It's a clever idea and I like what you've done with it so far. Great work!

Author's Response: Hi!

I am so glad the summary interested you, it was my baby for...a long time before it finally met my approval.

Ah, thank you!! I was terrified to write her, feeling that I would badly butcher her character, so I am glad you think she seems like a younger version of her canon self! That means alot to me. (although, reading over the last chapter or two I have posted, I am wondering if she is at all believable).

I am pleased that you think so. Hehe gotta love Slughorn...

Ha, he is very strange, yes :P

Yeaahh. Hehe, no, he doesn't. The weirdness coming out in him.

Thank you so much!! I am so glad you enjoyed it!!

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