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Review:marauderfan says:
Hi there! You seem to have disappeared from the forums, but I'm here with your review!

I was really happy to see the return of Astoria. They seem like a realistic couple to me in that they go through good and bad times, and this just seems to be one of their off days. But I can see Draco's feelings shifting - while Astoria isn't really my type of person, I feel bad for her. That's really the last thing you want when it's approaching your wedding day...

I was surprised Harry just let her out like that, given what had happened at her last place. I mean I get that he understands the feeling of confinement after living in a cupboard under the stairs growing up, but I'm sure he was informed about the crazy beast animals that attacked Ana previously. I don't know, it just seemed very odd for him to do that, especially considering how Harry is when he wants to find out information about someone (thinking about when he set house-elves to stalk Malfoy in HBP. Has he got someone following Ana?)

Little sister?! I seem to remember her brother not being present when the fire got Ana's house, so I had thought he was alive for a while until he was never mentioned again, at which point I assumed he was dead. So... he's a bear? I'm intrigued to see how he got himself into that state.

Nice work on this chapter!

Author's Response: Yup, MC_HK is no more.

Oh, well... Maybe you should wait and see what happens with Astoria ;)

Something I left out, and it was because Harry's POV is never seen in the story, is that he has enchantments surrounding the area of his home that would alert him to anyone coming or leaving. It's something I need to put in, and kind of never did. Sorry leave you confused there.

Oh, he's alive. If you decide to read on, then you'll get to understand his powers more.

Thank you for reading. :)

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