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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hello!! :D

I loved this chapter just as much as I loved all of the other ones! It's super okay to have a filler chapter every once in a while--of course, you don't need to have one every time, but it's nice to get one every now and then so that you can explore relationships between characters. :)

Ellie reminds me a lot of myself in this chapter. (Not that I run... Because I don't.) I too enjoy getting ready away from other people, and giving myself a certain time limit in which to get ready. Hooray for weirdos like us! :D

It's really funny how Ellie ships Rose and Scorpius. Shipping people in real life is fun to do, but only as long as you don't tell them. However, because Scorpius is so in lurve with Rose, it's fine to point out the obvious. ;)

The Seymour Krelboyne reference... Oh my gosh! :D I LOVE that movie, even though it's a B minus movie (rather than a B movie, heh heh). Have you seen the musical version? It has Rick Moranis as Seymour!!! For that reason, if nothing else, you should watch it (provided that you haven't already seen it, of course).

Okay... Say something constructive now... Nope!! This chapter was full of humor, good grammar and spelling, and super handy character development. You've got a great thing going with this story, and I don't want to see it stop!! Please update soon so that I may enjoy more of Ellie's escapades!

One suggestion that I have that isn't really CC, but I'll put it in to make it seem like I actually gave you a constructive review: I would LOVE to see more ghosties in the next chapter. Maybe more Regulus, or some new ghostie. I think that it would really help drive the story along. But then again, I'm sure that this entire paragraph is useless, because you've already got wonderful ghosties planned for chapter 6! ;)

Please update soon!

Author's Response: I didn't want this to be a filler chapter, so that's why I'm feeling so upset that it turned out to be one. I did enjoy writing Scorpius though. I hadn't quite fleshed out his character yet, but this gave me the chance to get to know him better, which was really nice.

I'm glad that you feel that you can see parts of yourself in Ellie. I think that's really important because it helps to connect with the character, which is super important for me.

Exactly! Never tell someone that you ship them with someone else! It takes all the fun out of it otherwise.

The only version of Little Shop of Horrors I've seen is the one that my school put on a couple of years ago, but I really enjoyed it! I've heard great things about the cult classic, so I have to find it and watch it!

Oh, thank you so much! I thought the humour was a little light here, but maybe that was just me. There is a ghost planned for the next chapter - and a new one, which will hopefully shed some light on how Ellie handles such things. As well as plot progression!

Thanks so much for this fantabulous review! :D


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