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Review:Iellwen says:
So I had to read all the five chapters because the character you've created is just amazing.

Funny, witty and sarcastic with crazy or unexpected references or thoughts. Extremely lovable girl, that Ellie!

It's a delight to read even if the plot could be considered as a little slow to progress. You detail and lot of lazier people could get thrown off by it. So what? You're creating your own plot and developing a unique and original character so take all the time you need; this is your story!^^

And there's some upcoming twist in the plot with Remulus and the wall in the Restricted Section foreshadowing anyway

I can't seem to find anything else to write but update soon! :D

Author's Response: Oh! Thank you so much! I really enjoy writing Ellie's thoughts and feelings. She doesn't think in the exact same way as those around her and that leads to some interesting observations!

I know the plot is so slow! I rushed the plot a little in my other novel, but because I do have it planned, I feel like I am on the right track with it. Thanks so much for your encouragement :)

And all the foreshadowing all the time! Yay!

Thanks again for this wonderful review!

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