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Review:milominderbinder says:
Hi hon! Here from review tag :D

WOW I really liked this story. I can definitely see why it placed in the unexpected voice challenge! You really took an extremely minor character and managed to weave his life into the canon world perfectly.

I thought a lot of ways you did this were really clever. Especially the Mary connection - I never would have thought about them being the same person before I read this!

I also loved the mentions of Potterwatch :D It's little details like that which really make this fic more realistic. I think some wartime fics, while good, forget that we actually have quite a few details about what life in the war was like from canon. Things like potterwatch are so rarely mentioned in fic, and it's annoying sometimes, so I loved that inclusion here.

I also thought Reg and Mary were really sweet, and I liked their relationship. I feel like they kind of projected an air of being 'in it together', even when they were technically parted. That was sweet to read :)

~Maia

Author's Response: Maia! ♥ Aah thank you! (Ps- CONGRATS on your first place in that challenge, you absolutely deserved it!)

Eee, I am so glad you liked this, and thought it was clever! I love writing minor characters for that reason, I just think it's cool to imagine the ways that so many things in the wizarding world tied together, and how everything looks from the perspective of a really average, non-Chosen One. I'm glad you appreciated the Mary connection too!

I've always thought Potterwatch was the coolest thing and that all the people on it were awesome. So it was fun to include that and show a different side of the programme from the one seen in the books. Ah, thank you for saying it seemed realistic! That is so great to hear!

Thanks, I'm so happy that you liked Reg and Mary :) That's a wonderful way to think about it, that they were in it together despite the physical separation.

Thank you for such a wonderful review!!!


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