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Review:MrsKatieGrint says:
Hey there!

Okay, this was seriously so cute! And for a lot of challenges, but this was great and I think these three challenges flowed wonderfully in your story!(:

I thought the dialogue was super funny and witty, and very Fred like. I absolutely adore the twins, and I think you did a great job characterizing them!

I lovelovelove the things Fred thinks. You have him down to a t, and he's just perfect. Lol, and I adored the mistletoe scene! I saw that this was also for that challenge, so I was glad that everything wasn't just about that scene.

The only thing I would suggest is msybe adding in more details. Trust me, when I say I understand your pain, because I know I get super excited to write something so I speed through scenes to get to the 'good stuff' but when you take the time to explain everything and make pretty pictures, it makes the 'good stuff' so much better!

All in all, I thought this was lovely, fluffy story, that went well with all the challenges, and mine.(:

Thank you for participating, and good luck!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Katie!! :D And, I can't wait for u to update your novel, so hurry!! :D

Too many compliments! But, thank u thank u thank u!!

I honestly was terrified at the idea of writing Fred! He's one of my favourite characters and I was scared f not doing him justice! I'm glad u found it funny! :D

Ah, yes, might have been a bit...ambitious with the challenges ;) But, I'm glad u think they flowed well :)

Yeah, I've got a few comments on the description- I went back and edited it yesterday :) So, hopefully that version will be out soon :)

Thank u! Thank u for making the challenge! I loved it! And my quote *squeee* So super sweet!!!

Anyway, please update your novel and thank u for the many compliments!!

-ReeBee :)

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