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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Round 2! Woo!

I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm very pleased with your portrayal of Draco and Astoria, and I love how Astoria was talking to Harry and Ginny, brilliant job. I think Draco was especially spot on.

I like your introduction of characters, it's very interesting to see how everyone interacts. I feel bad for Laila, that no one wants to be friends with her, she seems like such a nice girl. And that teacher is so mean, but way to show the Professor up with those grades!

You said your Area of Concern was the characters and the introductions. Your characters are well introduced for the short amount of time we see them, and I think you do a good job of interwebbing everyone so that they interact realistically.

I really enjoyed reading this story, I hope you re-request! Thanks again for the request! Brilliant job!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: I wasn't sure how I should portray Draco. I didn't want him too be too cold, but at the same time I've read one too many stories where he's chums with the potters and weasleys (which canon wise probably would never happen), so thank you!

I really love writing Laila's friends and all their different dynamics and whatnot, so I wanted to make sure I introduced them properly. Thank you so much for doing this and a rerequest will be on its way shortly ;)

-Sankavi ^_^

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