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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hi! Thanks for requesting a review in my thread! I'll leave a longer review on chapter 2, but just wanted to do a couple of housekeeping things first.

I liked this chapter, it's definitely interesting! I can't wait to find out WHO Laila's mum is! I love how she's different from a typical Malfoy, the second she mentioned Scorpius being in Slytherin I knew she was going to get sorted into a different house, I just couldn't figure out what one.

Just a quick spelling error:

-In the first part of the story the main character is talking about Scorpius and she says someting that ends with "..and a charmer among girl." I think you need an 's' after the word girl.

Your ending to this story is wicked strong, great job!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Ack, thank you for spotting the spelling error! I can't wait till people find out about her mum (but it'll be a while till we get to that . . .)

thanks for doing this and can't wait to read the next review!

(sorry i responded so late)

-Sankavi ^_^

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