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Review:Infinityx says:
Hi! Erin here!

I must say, I was intrigued as soon as read the very first two lines. Your descriptions are so vivid and I love your writing style.

This is the first story I've come across with Regulus as the main character. I'm really interested to see how things will proceed from here. I think you've done a great job at establishing Regulus' character, and I love the way you brought his father into the picture. It gives a greater insight into what Regulus' childhood was like for him to end up in the position that he's in now. And the way you indicated the sense of morality within him, gave the sense of wholeness to his character.

One small thing that I'd like to point out. As I was reading, I felt like I had come across "nerve" quite often. There's "Regulus tried to control his nerves", "a cold, unnerving feeling surrounded the room", "Malfoy unnerved Regulus". It kind of stood out for me while I was reading the chapter.

Other than that, your chapter gave me the chills. I absolutely love all the descriptions and all the details in them. I definitely feel the urge to keep reading, so update soon! :)

Author's Response: Hey Erin!

Oh, thank you so much! I'm really happy to hear that you like my writing style!

Yeah, I haven't seen Regulus as a main character very much, which is one of the reasons I decided to writ him!

Thank you for pointing that out! I didn't notice that, so I might go through and have a bit of a re-read!

Thanks for the lovely review! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!


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