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Review:PitchBlue says:
Oooh this chapter! Gemma, my poor baby, it's hearbreaking :( Uuuugh seriously man all the feels. EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER! I'm not going to survive this, I swear. I'm too involved! Because you write so well afjdqsklfjkdqlsm.

Anywaaay, this is a brilliant chapter. I loved to see more of Gemma and Gio's friendship, they're the best. And I love how you incorporate those big plot moments so naturally! That's a very difficult thing to do, so yay Carly's a genius! :D

I think the best thing about this chapter is that it's so relatable. You wrote it like something that everyone can relate to (apart from the Seer stuff, haha). I mean the break up of course. Man, every little detail about it is spot on! Again, your descriptions are just amazing :)

Ooooh can't wait for the Lily chapter and the group chapter! :D

Author's Response: Man, if you couldn't survive these last couple chapters, you're going to go crazy during the next group one. Seriously, it's the most dramatic chapter yet. I would say it's the most dramatic one of the entire series, since EVERYONE has something happen to them, but the final ending is quite shocking as well XD

I know, aren't Gio and Gemma super cute? I tried to make it clear that she doesn't have a lot of friends (I mean, she's chill with the band, but she isn't besties with all of them), so Gio's her rock. And yes, I dropped some useful information in this chapter. When will Gemma drink the potion? Who knows ... (I know XD).

Well, I was going through something similar (not the break up part, but the crying part) when I wrote this chapter, so that's why it's so spot on. I have to say tho, it was nice to channel all that bad energy into something productive/creative :)

The next chapter is going to be at a Slug Club meeting - I realized I hadn't even referenced them in the story yet, so why not have Lily go to her last one of the year? And the group chapter will be the Quidditch finals - who will win???

Thanks for the review, you know I love ya to pieces ;)


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