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Review:Cannons says:
*applauds generously*

You are a genius. A genius - A genius is a person who displays exceptional intellectual ability, creativity, or originality, typically to a degree that is associated with the achievement of unprecedented insight. A genius is what you are.

Having a story based around Seamus? My joint favourite character along with Ron, Luna, Hermione and Neville. and Ginny. Having Seamus working in the fireworks section of the shop. Oh wow, why couldn't I have though of it.

Now it's great having an idea, but you have actually executed it so far. I have only read chapter 1 at the moment.

You have kept him to cannon perfectly, with the fireworks, his burst of aggression, and his inability to talk to women is a believable addition.

Also I don't know if you remember but in DHPt2 he has this amazingly funny scene at the end in the room of requirement so I loved the line when he said - ' “Sorry love, employees only back here,”' it just seemed like something he would say.

This woman is quite scary, I don't know what she's getting worked up about, if it clearly said on the packaging 'not suitable for water' then I don't see how she has a leg to stand on. So I am very interested in to learning why she is so angry and why she is acting so bullish.

I enjoyed this immensely and will read on.

Cannons

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I can't even describe how wonderful that review made me feel! Thank you sososo much! :) I love Seamus and I really tried to keep him canon, and I'm so glad that you, (and others) seem to think that I'm getting it! :D And idk, I was thinking about him one day and where he'd work, and the fireworks section popped into my mind. XD

oh Hazel. She's having a rough day, but she gets better. She does seem bullish though, I completely agree. XD

Again, thank you so much! This review completely made my day, and if my response didn't make much sense, it's because I'm stunned. :D

-J


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