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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello!

I'm so sorry I wasn't quite as speedy with this review as the previous one! I've managed to get here at last though.

First things first I have to praise your beginning section with the floo powder. It would have been so easy to breeze past that part but you didn't. I loved that you went into detail with the ministry official and then having the extra strength for the international floo. It's details like that make a story so kudos to you!

Now, you had already peaked my curiosity before, but now I'm dying to know what's happening! So many questions left unanswered! Something happened to the girls parents meaning she went missing and now she's been found. Gah I want to know.

I loved your characterisation of McGonagall and Ophelia. It was nice to see someone tease Minerva about her strict ways and it was nice to see Minerva with a friend outside of Hogwarts! Especially such an usual one. Their exchange was really easy and fun to read.

You've done a really good job of not rushing Sadie. She obviously knows McGonagall but that doesn't mean she trusts her and goes with her straight away. In the end section we get to see from her own POV that she's still not totally sure but she's willing to give them a chance. Now I just can't wait to find out more about what happened to her.

This was once again a great chapter. Your descriptions were lovely and the story flowed well, keeping just enough secret to keep our curiosity burning! I really enjoyed it!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Howdy! I'm terribly sorry that I was so far from speedy with this response that you can't even see it from here! All I can say is Real Life and Stuff.

But thanks so much for reading!

Aw, you liked the Floo section? Cool! Thanks. One of the things I have always loved about Harry Potter is that this whole world was created! And what a quirky world it is. Any time I can play with that, or invent things that fit into that, I love it. Because to me it just shows that wizards don't take things too seriously and we all need a little more of that in our lives.

Yes, I left you with questions! That's the point! To make people wonder enough about what's happening to want to come back and read more! So, maybe you'll want to know more?

Writing Minerva and Ophelia was so much fun. I loved giving Minerva a friend who I could imagine her getting into mischief with when they were younger. The minute Minerva pulled Harry onto the Quidditch team in book one instead of getting him in trouble, I knew there was more to her than just the strict-teacher she shows on the outside.

Sadie has a lot of reasons not to trust people by now, sadly. But hopefully she'll learn to again. And I'm so glad you like her character so far!

Thank you so much for reading! Your review made me smile when I got it, and now again as I read it again to respond.

- Farmgirl


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