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Review:800 words of heaven says:

Oh, it's been so long since I read the first chapter of this, I'd forgotten how much fun this was!

I absolutely adore Albus. He's just as much an elitist as Malfoy, but his elitism is much more subtle - or different, I don't know. I haven't quite decided. He does appear to be enjoying his position of power over Malfoy a whole lot!

Scorpius is also fun, because he's so different to the way I've seen him portrayed typically. He doesn't seem to have as fine a control over his emotions as Lucius or Draco did (or used to, before you know, Voldemort happened) and I love that he's a bit of a potty mouth. I'm excited to see where their relationship will go. Will it remain the same? Or will it evolve?

I giggled at the ending. They don't seem to be very good at surveillance, no matter how much either of them pretend and posture! I'm wondering what wonderful excuse they'll come up with to explain their terribly spying?

Your writing is wonderful as always. I've read some of your other work, and I think that this story is a little different from the types of things that I've read of yours already. It's still incredibly excellent!

PS: Is the Bulgarian mobster Victor Krum? OMG that's fantastic!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D It's lovely to hear that this story is fun - that's just the kind of thing I hoped readers would feel about it. It's a pretty shameless story, not at all serious, just playing with as many cliches as possible with as many one-liners as I can manage (which isn't many, but oh well :P).

You've pointed out a very important aspect of Albus's character as well as of his narration. He's guilty of many of the same things as Scorpius, but he either refuses to admit it, or (and this is more likely) he doesn't realize it. His self-evaluation skills are somewhat lacking.

I'm hoping that their relationship will evolve (if I manage to finish this story, which would be nice). They're supposed to learn how to trust one another and see how well they work together as a team - they discover tyat they do have a decent chemistry and can bounce ideas off one another well, which is perfect for Auror partners.

It's great to hear that you like Scorpius's quirks. I enjoy writing him differently like this - there are a lot of ways to develop him, and it's fun to find new ways of interpreting his character.

Thank you for the wonderful compliments! It means so much to hear them from you! ^_^ And it means a lot that you're enjoying the story. :D

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