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Review:toomanycurls says:
O.O This is amazing. The entire time I thought the story would reveal some evil wizard's origin. I wasn't expecting it to be *that* person. (I won't say incase someone reads this as it's a bit of a spoiler.)

I feel like this is one of the most beautifully written stories I've read. This has a very poetic flow to it. The way you talk of the creature's history and past experiences gives such a sense of depth. The narrative voice you use sounds like it came straight out of an old time fairy tale. The hint of darkness to the tale is wonderfully done.

As he seduces the woman in the second part of the story I was on the edge of my seat. He seemed to fall in love with her as much as she fell for him. I'm curious to read her perception of their relationship.

I loved how the incubus watched over his child. It really showed a level of care and interest I never would have thought possible. And, again, the ending nearly knocked me out of my chair!!

Excellently done!

-Rose

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Ah, thank you! This review itself is amazing! I'm really glad it surprised you as that's just what I was going for, hehe.

Wow, thank you, that's such a lovely compliment! I love writing in this sort of style and I'm very pleased you liked the narrative voice and it's old-fashioned style.

It's interesting how you perceived his feelings for her, I was wondering how people might react to that! :) I think that she loved him too, but in a dreamlike, unrealistic sort of way since he's not a real lover in the convention sense. Hmm, I might have to write a follow-up with her reactions to it someday! :P

I'm happy that the story brought a new perspective to an incubus, and of course that you were surprised by the ending. :) Thanks so much for a wonderful review!


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