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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Wow, this was such a great chapter!

I really enjoyed Astrid's point of view because there was this beautiful...simplicity about it. I am slightly worried about this German Lieutenant because I'm sure that nothing good can come from Astrid being around him! And Astrid seems such a basically good, peaceful person that I don't want anything bad to happen to her! I mean, I don't want anything to happen to the other characters, but I have a bit of a soft spot for Astrid.

Aw, Simon. I think you've written his thoughts and feelings on his new, horrible life really well. My heart is just breaking for him!

Aaah, the Camille and Xavier scene was just perfect! It is obvious they both have clear feelings for each other, but both are slightly afraid of taking the next step. But I just loved how you combined the touch of romance and then the whole war situation AND magic, with the healing spell and Astrid's talking patronus. It was a great scene, and very well written!

For fairly obvious reasons, Simon's last POV was my favourite. The way you described Esther's heart felt like it was about to break in two, it was so well done! But they found a wand! Hidden in a toilet brush! I am curious to know more about that but for now all I can hope is that Simon and Sarah's escape mission was successful. It all just seems too good to be true, so I'm more than a tad concerned right now!

This story is just so good!


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