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Review:Lululuna says:
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Ah, this was such an original and entertaining beginning to your story! I've never read a Seamus-based story but I really enjoyed what you've done with him here. His top temper and inability to cope with someone being rude to him, even if it's just a customer, was very canon, but the part of his character I loved most was how bad he is with women. It really made me giggle at the poor guy. :P Seamus working in the fireworks section of the shop was really genius too as I feel like he would do well in that area and it seems a logical job to have after graduating Hogwarts. I can't remember if Seamus' talent for blowing things up came from the books or the movies, but either way it's a great part of his character which has lots of opportunities for silliness.

Something else I liked were the little mentions of George and how developed his character was even if he didn't make an actual appearance. It was interesting how George turned into sort of a tyrant as a boss and how he really threw himself into his work after Fred's death - that made a lot of sense to me as to how he would cope with it. The little details, like George being good at talking to girls unlike the rest of his family, were really cute,

This angry girl seems interesting. I'm curious as to why she is so infuriated about the fireworks not working - perhaps she has pyrotechnic aspirations after Seamus' own heart? She seems really stubborn and rude as well, which makes her and Seamus a good match in some ways. I'm curious to see how on earth they would get together after this rather threatening exchange. :P

This was a great start to your story, I really enjoyed reading it! :) I'll try and drop by sometime soon to check out the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I tried to stick to as much a canon-Seamus as possible, (and the explosions are actually from both books & movies, just so you know lol). He's by far one of my favorite characters.

Oh George, I can't wait till he actually makes an appearance in the story. I actually didn't think about his character that much, I kind of just went with my gut - but I'm glad you liked where that led me! :)

And Hazel, yes, she's a firecracker. Hehe, they'll get together - maybe - eventually. (x

Thank you so much again, and I look forward to possibly seeing you by again! :)

-J


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