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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Hey, there!

So, I saw your story Raven's Call on Recently Added and I thought it was interesting and cool, so was said it didn't have reviews, but wanted to come read this first and I'm even more sad that this has no reviews either.

I really enjoyed this first chapter; it felt action packed and intense even though there was no actual action (e.i. fighting or seeing the bad guys). The pace seemed really fast and helped me to understudy that something was going to happen to Proudfoot. That was cool.

I'm very interesting in knowing exactly what he was doing and curious about this blackmailer. I can't wait to keep reading.

Also, I think it's so cool that it's in Ron's PoV. He's a very under appreciated character, which is sad, but I love him. :D

Sam.

Author's Response: Hi. Thanks for reviewing. Yes, I enjoyed writing from Ron's POV. I wanted to show Ron's growing independence and growing disenchantment from parts of the Ministry

I'm afraid Proudfoot's fate won't be solved until Part 3, but of course it was this incident that started Harry's investigation. Proudfoot was sent to clean up any evidence before any authorities became aware. This was a test that went wrong (which is why he was alone and arrived in such a hurry) but he was expecting something similar to happen only on a much smaller scale. The scale is important.

Far too soon to give any hints about the blackmailer, but Proudfoot wasn't the only one involved in this enterprise. The inference being, others might have been coerced into helping.

Thanks again.


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