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Review:800 words of heaven says:

So sorry for the sort of late review - I had to go have dinner.

I think this is a very promising start to your story. It's very much like a prologue, rather than a chapter one. As readers, we know where we stand with the main character. She seems quite the loose cannon, which are my favourite types of cannons, incidentally.

Not funny? Okay. That's fine.

I'm looking forward to seeing how she fits into the Malfoy family tree and how she really handles being an outcast at school. I'm also excited about getting to know Scorpius and Albus!

Good start!

Author's Response: That's fine :)

It is actually a prolouge, but earlier I didn't like having the chapters not match up with the numbers and it was really irking me :/ (i did for a while have prologue/chapter 1 but thought that didn't look so great either . . )

She is kind of a loose cannon (and don't worry, you're totes funny ;) ) and you'll see a bit more of that in the chapters to come! I can't wait till you meet albus! (is it bad if i like him more than my main character? haha)

Thanks so much for the review!

-Sankavi ^_^

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