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Review:Penelope Inkwell says:
Well, it’s unsurprising that they’d not be a cohesive team, given all the factors at play. Fitz has it right, though, when he blames them for taking the easy route--blaming others instead of shouldering the responsibility of their own poor performance. But at least from here we can really only go up. And at least Jinks caught the Snitch, so it ended on their own terms. Hopefully this retreat will do some good, or the knowledge that, if they ever want to play Quidditch again for the Pride or any team, they’ll have to pull themselves together. I have hope : )

Yeah, we’ll see how long this kiss-embargo lasts between Fitz and Molly. They’re both practical and professional, particularly Molly, so of course they had to say that. But, I mean, come on. It’s only a matter of time.

Thanks for the new chapter! I really enjoy this story :D

--Penny

Author's Response: He's definitely got a point there. Nobody is taking personal responsibility there. It's good Jinks actually is fast at the Snitch, or they'd probably be the new Chudley Cannons. Hang on to hope! Maybe they'll get better.

Practical and professional vs strong attraction - what will win? ;) I'm really glad you're enjoying the story, and thank you so much for the review!


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