Okay! I loved this! Like seriously, awesome Tanya! I wasn't actually sure whether to read this or your other one shot, but seeing as this had less reviews, I thought I'd give this a go :)
The only CC- the part where the professor decides to let Susan participate is a bit unclear. And, I'm not exactly sure where she is, university (wizarding equivalent), or somewhere else?
Other than that, amazing! Great plot, characterisation (could go on forever about this!) and dialogue! You have also managed to balance out dialogue and description really well, so kudos to u! :) And, Susan is such an awesome character! Love her!!
I loved it! And it really deserves more reviews!
Author's Response: *squee* Thank you, ReeBee!!! :-D I'm glad you chose this one-shot over Forgettable Me, to be honest, cause she does need the love more. hehehe And I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Huh, you know, I'm not really sure I know where she is either... LOL That's not a good sign, is it? :-p I mean, I don't have the particulars, but I do know that she's training to become someone who helps magical creatures and is in whatever the equivalent to Auror training would be. It's never really specified how life after Hogwarts works, so I guess I just ignored that aspect? hehehe And sorry if that bit confused you! To be honest, the whole story was written in two days, and unfortunately editing is a little tricky because the whole thing rhymes, so if I change one thing, I have to work out a whole other rhyme-scheme and ugh, the hassle. You know how slow a writer I am when things DON'T need to rhyme, so I think I'll probably just ignore it for now, but maybe someday if I ever catch up on my WIP's, I'll revisit this guy! Either way, thanks for pointing it out!
This makes me so happy! I was so worried when I was first writing this about whether or not the plot and characters were still strong and the story was still good beyond the fact that it rhymed, you know? And it's great to hear that you loved Susan! This was my first time even attempting to write her and it was fun creating a character for her, as she's not too developed in the books!
Anyway, you're the best! Thank you so much for this wonderful review! It's completely made my day! *hugs*